I revisited this painting, deepened the color, added some darks to rocks ... And then painted the one below, which has a few nice little passages in the rocks, but I'm not happy with the sky and water.
Maybe some cropping would improve both.
Then, just some playing with clouds, above, and a copy of a Winslow Homer, below. My horizon bled all over!
Rather than cropping maybe some brushwork in the sea (smoother towards the horizon) like you have in the rocks would lead the eye to a quieter sky? The clouds that you have done lately are so expressive. I can't think of the right words but they are very cloudy! I love them.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea, Lisa, thank you! And thanks re the clouds: I've had some good ones to work with of late!
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