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(5x6)Such a dark background scares me: I'm not so good at darks. In the first attempt (top) I tried to follow advice in a book about changing colors as I went, but it seemed too much--maybe because the colors in the flowers are so delicate. I stopped and put a wash of mars violet over it to try to pull it together.
In the second version I didn't try to get creative with the background and tried to not put so much paint into the flower.
I really enjoyed, in both, painting the vase: the shapes inside it were easy to see and helped to show the volume.
Oh, fabulous! I love the way you have approached them. Lovely loose, free brush strokes, brilliant.
ReplyDeleteI had the same problem with that dark background and I am glad I practised on a piece of paper before going in for the real thing.
Your results are superb.
I like both versions but I prefer the first. I love that faded out background, it gives a misty, mysterious feel and I think you made a beautifully balanced composition there
ReplyDeleteThese are just gorgeous, Laura - I love the second one as it just looks so wet and luscious, but both are loose and lovely.
ReplyDeleteHey Laura,
ReplyDeleteThese look fabulous. I love the way you handled the vase with the reflections in both pieces. It's hard isn't it to decide how loose you want to be with the composition but I think you did a spot on job with both. Can't believe you have time for two!
oh my these are wonderful. The whites are whites the shadows are correct... just lovely. I painted a version of the flower with the vase but lost the whites. The blacks are always challenging. I seem to like them on other peoples paintings but not my own. With your paintings, I believe I favor the one with the dark backround. But both are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone. I love VSD posting day: so many comments to leave and to read.
ReplyDeleteGail: I work on both, bouncing back and forth, at the same time. Sometimes, if I'm lucky, I figure something out doing one that helps me with the other!
both are wonderful. Love all the colours in the background of the first one and how delicate the flower looks in the last.
ReplyDeleteThese are just stunning, Laura! I love both of these. Such rich color choices, too, and you're so right--the glass has fabulous volume to it.
ReplyDeleteWow Laura, you did two!!! I barely got one done. I like how colorful the first one is and the way the background lightens on the left side. The second one is so nice and crisp with beautiful, clean colors. Both are winners!
ReplyDeleteOh Laura I really like them. The first is my favorite. I love the colors you got in the background. Especially on the right side.
ReplyDeleteIf I had to choose I think I'd go for the second painting, but both are great.
ReplyDeleteI'm in love with the second one - it just drinks in the light! The background is great and really sets off the entire composition. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYour work is stunning and these are no exception. I like them both, can't pick a favorite :)
ReplyDeleteI so admire artists like yourself who can control watercolor - these are nicely done. I'm a little partial to the second one, but they are both nice.
ReplyDeleteRich color!
ReplyDeleteBoth of them work beautifully.
Each background treatment makes a completely different atmosphere.
I prefer them both! :)
Beautiful delicate watercolors, both. Love the top background, visually interesting. You were brave to try the dark background and did it well, I didn't even go there!
ReplyDeleteI love the first painting. I like the boldness of the background and your control of the paint in the flower is wonderful. I'm also impressed with the way you handled the table reflection. Looking at your painting, I'm puzzled as to why iI found it so difficult. Must give it another try...
ReplyDeleteWow. Inspiring. I chickened out after all. Flowers are really intimidating. Really nice.
ReplyDeleteI actually enjoy the background of the first painting better. They both are lovely.
ReplyDeleteI love version one. It has a poetry to it. technically and creatively well done.
ReplyDeleteI love the colors and looseness in the first. The second is wonderful, too. No favorite. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteBoth are beautiful. Clean, strong colors and a lovely vibrance.
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for commenting. It's really so very interesting to read what each person has to say, seeing the different responses and takes; it's like alittle tutorial in critiqueing (something I always aspire to be better at). Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThey're both beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWonderful work!
It is certainly hard to choose. Both are gorgeous .. the atmospheric background in the first;the light on the petals in the second, which makes them soar up. Beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteI really like them both....... I love the first.
ReplyDeleteYou have such a wondefully expressive way with flowers. These are lovely.
ReplyDeleteHow delightful! I love the colors in the background on the first and prefer it over the second. Both are beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is really a tremendous approach to this photo. I just love the way you continued to work.
ReplyDeleteSherrie Roberts
I'll put my neck on the line and say I liked the second one best
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing